Vigilance 09

As an homage to the iconic image of superhumans catching trains, this is nice, but there are a lot of flaws that come thru the longer you look at it. As a penciler, you shouldn't be denoting color, but lights/darks. You definitely went on a pencil-pushing tangent, just filling in space. And isn't her costume white? Watch the anatomy; her boobs look like inflatable devices shoved into her costume. I'd suggest references where women are fully clothed to see how bustlines are formed. Also, its one thing to use reference to draw something, its another to use it because you can't. What you have going on here suggests the latter. It looks like you traced the image of a train and since that train didn't have any actual damage on it, neither does the train in your piece (cracks aren't enough).